My sister and her husband left yesterday. We had a great visit.
Thanks to all those who helped with the accent (
entropy_house and especially
vilakins ). I've made some changes now so that it will read easier. I've also made some revisions and added some things to all of the parts.
Now that I have more time to spend on writing, I won't have to keep adding things later that I forgot to deal with. Thanks for everyone's patience. Back to Chapter 10 Changes marked in blue.
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Now that I have more time to spend on writing, I won't have to keep adding things later that I forgot to deal with. Thanks for everyone's patience. Back to Chapter 10 Changes marked in blue.