B7: Knowing the Enemy - Chapter 09

Rating: Gen
6th Story of Perceptions
Sequel to Memories

EDIT:  Made adjustments to improve the flow and also some additions. Marked in blue.

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I'm stuck in the Twilight Zone...or rather my post is...

Hmm...I was making a revision to the most recent Chapter 09 story posting and now it seems that I've lost it. Or rather, I can still see it but it doesn't show up on my Friends page. I have double-checked and it is on Everyone (Public) and the Date/Time appears fine.

Can anyone see it?

B7: Knowing the Enemy - Chapter 09

Rating: Gen
6th Story of Perceptions
Sequel to Memories

EDIT:  Made adjustments to improve the flow and also some additions. Marked in blue.
EDITED:  Sorry everyone, had to repost this because, for some strange reason, the other one doesn't show up anymore, except for me. I've also taken the opportunity to add a Vila and Sester part which were missing and a few sentences to the Avon/Cally section. Marked in red.

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