They have a K9!

I like the changes showing Reya's thoughts and decision to tell, especially her deciding it was her turn to reveal something of herself.

Athol Prime? Don't you have a character called Athol, or am I thinking of something else?

keep a close hand your credit markers and watch your back.
on your

If it weren't for her responsibility Blake
for Blake? for avenging Blake?

It’s been along time.
a long time (as opposed to a short one)

“I see. Whose idea was this?
Needs a quote at the end

Can you playing a secondary role?
play