Yay for Corinne joining, though I knew she would! What will her function be? She seems as if she'd learn quickly.

Is this the end of this story? It sort of feels like it.

“Oh, I don’t I could do that
don't think?

I know its crazy
it's

Avon and Cally were in the examination room, studied the findings that the Tellarans had concluded in their comprehensive examination of Avon’s mind and body.
studying
And I'm not sure about concluding a finding. Maybe:
Avon and Cally were in the examination room, studying the concludions that the Tellarans had come to in their comprehensive examination of Avon’s mind and body.

much of the adjustments to your mind
most