Mar. 26th, 2009

kalinda001: (Avon_Hooked on Writing)

Author's note: I have been learning to give more focus to the women in this story. It hasn't been easy as so much of the show was hogged by the men. With some invaluable help, encouragement and suggestions, it has slowly become easier. I still find it hard having the women interacting with each other without at least referencing the men but it is getting there.

As a result, there has been a major readjustment of scenes and paragraphs in Chapter Two due to some material that is being inserted. I have split Chapter Two and inserted a large section of the new interaction here. The boys breakfast conflict has been moved to a later chapter. As always, new material marked in blue.

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] vilakins and [livejournal.com profile] reapermum for your invaluable suggestions to flesh out and develop the interaction of the women and for the rearrangement of the scenes.

It has now become:

Category: Humour, Drama and Angst (and some singing)

Link back to B7 Perceptions: A Difference of Visions - Chapter 02

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