Category: Humour, Drama and Angst (and some singing)
10th Story of Perceptions
Sequel to Mysteries and Discoveries
Introduction: The intruder. The women have a time alone.
Author's note: There has been a major readjustment of scenes and paragraphs in Chapter Two due to some material that is being inserted. I have split Chapter Two and inserted a large section of the new interaction here. The boys breakfast conflict has been moved to a later chapter. As always, new material marked in blue.
Thanks to vilakins and reapermum for your suggestions to flesh out and develop the interaction of the women and for the rearrangement of the scenes.( Read more... )